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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
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熟练的采用了一些从句;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowsdays, many people like to judge a person by their appearns. It is absoutly that it is rather unwise.Firstly,appearance doesn't meant everything, someone looks concise,which can not prove that he or she can plan well, think about more and take action carefully. Secondly, if we want to have more ideas who they are, we have to collect many materials about them to judge their characters、interests、think modes and so on. Thirdly, as we all know that we should think consider more before we make decisions, if we think the person is not punctuality just because he could not arrive on time, actually he is late because that it was rain heavily. So the more we thike about before we judge the person, the more wise we are. Not to judge a person by his appearance should kept in our mind.

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