2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A beautiful place in China If my friend will comes to China, I'm going to take him to The Great Wall.The Great Wall is a character symbol of China tourist attractions.It have build up more than two thousand years and it even more unbelievable is in sharp tall and rugged Hill cultivate thousands of miles wall.what a wonderful place! when you are standing on the walland look down the sight of the great mountain,you wii can't help doing cheering.it is a genuine man should be visited place I think we will very happy in The Great Wall .