高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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i lived in am old hometown which is surround by beautiful woods.Many kinds of fishes in the river.small children had fun with each other by the river.local people live simply house what was made of wood and clay.the people was very diligent for farming from morning to night. However.this sight is become more and more badly.There are many high building was built in the hometown.many companies invested factories depend on destroy nature.on the other hand maybe it appear more richer.but it not maintain development.in the street there are more car.industrial environment become badly.reduce the rate of covering wood.reduce fish.The governance of pollution is more important at the moment.