邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

How to improve school safety Nowadays,school safety has become a serious problem which both teachers and parents have to pay attention to.as a student,I think personly that everyone's life is only once and we have to protect it from hurt.How to improve school safety?There are some tips. First,as teachers and headmasters,they should put students' safety on most important work.they should take more measures to improve it .And once emergencies happen,appear to the place at once and give hand. Then,as students,we must realize that everybody is their parents' peasures that nothing can replace .So whatever happens to us ,we should remember life first.