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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
学术词汇使用比较准确，文中用词稍显贫乏，词汇拼写要再接再厉；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；能够使用一些简单的从句；副词使用偏多；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
With the development of the Internet technology, communication is more and more rely on the Internet.Many people can stay home several month,because they can communicate with others through the Internet.Indeed,communicating on the Internet not only can reduce time but also quickly and convenient. Nevertheless,different people have different opinions,some people think that communicating on the Internet can not instead of the face to face communication.Because communicating on the Internet can not deliver the truly emotionand,however ,throughing the face to face communition can not only deliver the truly emotion but also promote the relationship of each. In my opinion,communicating on the Internet can not instead of the face to face communication.
