Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;作者能较恰当使用学术词汇,但词汇量总体上不足,拼写检查也要加强;简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;副词使用偏多。
With the development of the Internet technology, communication is more and more rely on the Internet.Many people can stay home in several months,because they can communicate with other through the Internet.Indeed,communication of Internet not only reduce time but also quickly and convenient. Nevertheless,different people have different opinions,some people think that communication of Internet can not instead of the face to face talking.Because communication of Internet can not deliver the truly emotion,however ,throughing the face to face communition not only deliver the truly emotion but also promote the relationship of each. In my opinion,communication of Internet can not instead of the face to face talking.