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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者学术词汇使用比较准确，不过文中词汇表达贫乏；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；有效的运用了一些复杂句；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
With the development of the Internet technology, communication is more and more rely on the Internet.Many people can stay home in several months,because they can communicate with others through the Internet.Indeed,communicating on the Internet not only can reduce the time but also convenient. Nevertheless,different people have different opinions,some people think that communicating on the Internet shouldn't instead the face to face communication.Because communicating on the Internet cannot deliver the truly emotion,however,through the face to face communication not only deliver the truly emotion but also promote the relationship of each other. In my opinion,communicating on the Internet can not instead of the face to face communication.
