Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
学术词汇使用比较准确,但文中词汇表达总体贫乏;注意句与句,段与段之间的衔接;可适当增加从句的使用,注意几处句子错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
With the development of the Internet technology, communication is more and more rely on the Internet.Many people can stay home in several months,because they can communicate with others through the Internet.Indeed,communicating on the Internet not only can reduce the time but also convenient. Nevertheless,different people have different opinions,some people think that Internet cannot replace the face-to-face communication.Because Internet cannot deliver the truly emotion,however,through the face-to-face communication not only deliver the truly emotion but also promote the relationship of each other. In my opinion,Internet cannot in ead of the face-to-face communication.