2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，词汇量总体偏小，注意词汇拼写的检查；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；文中从句的使用偏少。

1.1 With the development of the technology, communication is more and more rely on the Internet. [学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。 [批改提示] technology表示“工艺，技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击 2.1 Many people can stay home in several months, because they can communicate with others through the Internet. [学习提示] 易混词汇: little, few, several 均含“少量的”之意。 [批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。 [批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread [批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。 2.2 Indeed, communicating on the Internet not only can reduce the time but also conve nient. [拼写错误] conve 拼写错误，可替换选项为：convey, connive, cone [拼写错误] nient 拼写错误，可替换选项为：ninety, Ninetta, Ninette [学习提示] 易混词汇: indeed, really, truly, actually 均有“确实地，真正地”之意。 [批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread 2.3 Nevertheless, different people have different opinions, some people think that communicating on the Internet cannot replace the face-to-face communication. [搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...opinion 在教材中出现过 2989 次 [学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。 [批改提示] replace近义表达有displace/ supersede/ supplant [批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。 [批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread 2.4 Since the Internet communication cannot convey the truly emotion, but not only did the face-to-face communication can deliver the real feelings, but also promote the relationship of talker. [句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！ [搭配统计] 动名搭配 deliver...feeling 在教材中出现过 7 次 [搭配统计] 动名搭配 promote...relationship 在教材中出现过 45 次 [学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。 [批改提示] 注意convey和transport区别。 3.1 In my opinion, communicating on the Internet can not instead of the face-to-face communication. [学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。 [批改提示] communicate近义表达有pass on/ convey/ impart/ spread [批改提示] 查看can not和cannot的区别。详情点击