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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12895
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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With the development of the technology, communication is more and more rely on the Internet.Many people can stay home in several months, because they can communicate with others through the Internet. Indeed, communicating on the Internet not only can reduce the time but also convenient.Nevertheless, different people have different opinions, some people think that communicating on the Internet cannot replace the face-to-face communication.Since the Internet communication cannot convey the truly emotion, while not only can the face-to-face communication deliver the real feelings, but also promote the relationship of talkers. In my opinion, communicating on the Internet can not instead of the face-to-face communication.

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