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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6927
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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用户练习作文:

Advertising is one of paths to people for good understanding the corporate brand and their products. Of course, we can get their advanced technologies and new products through promotion campain, like trade shows, events etc. At the same time, the communication tools and communication media have the same function to improve the image of corporate brands, products, services among the people. Whatever, they are all the promotion tools of corporate to penetrate the market and drive the people's buying behaviour. Actually it is the another representation status of advertising. As a worldwide leading supplier of automotive industry, we are focus our business on the buying willing and behaviour of OEMs, not the ordinary person. So we just have the above methods to tell our customers what we have, and suggest what you need. Maybe we can promote our products to everyone some day if peole has the interest in it. Actually we have the pulic communicaiton media to initiate and foster the influence in ordinary person. If you have the interest in us, please subscribe ** on weibo and wechat.

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