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Some people think that older schoolchildren should learn wide range subjects and develop knowledge, other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss and give your own opinion.
题目分析与相关旧题：Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, while others say that students should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find interesting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In some countries, schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects, while in other countries, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today’s world, which system is more appropriate?
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For primary education, there are always a lot of debates going on, among which whether to teach a wide range of subjects or to focus on a small number of subjects is a concern. This paper will focus on the pro and con, and give my own opinion on this issue. To begin with, a wide range of subjects will broaden children's horizon. Especially when these subjects are systematically organized and taught in interdisciplinary way. These subjects will enhance their ability to explore the unknown world, not only some theoretical knowledge be of no practical use. Students will take the initiatives to pursue their goal with the multidisciplinary practice. They tend to be independent and innovative thinking, be responsible for their family and nation. But these students may not be acquaint with the theoretical knowledge, they may left behind during future academic study. While, learning a small number of subjects will build the students a strong foundation of theoretical knowledge, which will be of great use to be successful in the secondary and tertiary study. But the potential risk will lie with the less attraction to the students. Also, students lack the communications and interaction with the society, they tend to be self-centered, and can't manage the issue beyond their study. To concluded, it's not how many subjects should be taught in class, but to empower students to be a well rounded people with strong theoretical foundation. Thus, raise the requirement of the core subjects and at the same time encourage them to learn a wide range of subjects will be the better solution.
