2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Mobile phone should be restricted It seems to me that cartoon is sending a message about people are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sicks in order to see.Which reveals people are charmed their mobile phone.In my perspective of view, the mobile should be restricte. Apparent,losing in the cell people is not a good things.For one thing,losing in the mobile phone is going to result in indifference of people.For another thing,Time always waste in losing in cell phone.Last but not least,the radiation of the cell phone influence the people's health.As a result,the darwer of the illustration is urging us to restrict the aply of cell phone .Only in this way can we live a normal life. In conclusion,mobile phone should be restricted early.