2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；熟练使用了一些长难句；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；请注意分段。

in 21st century,the parents do everything for their children,and their kids are not concerned about they life because they want to have anything and they will have.as far as i am concerned the parents should not love their children in this way,because it is harm to the children and it is not to benefit to children grows.in my opinion,parent should give their children freedom,and let they create what they need.parent should not spoiling their children too much ,but should provide more help to them，parents should be timely when children make mistake point out and help to correct.