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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:8808
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分91.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Learning The Internet has exerted great influence on learning,so that an increasing number of individuals value it as a truth that obtaining information is equal to education. However, as the picture warns us, education involves more than simply learning to obtain information. From my perspective, education also includes a ideal thinking and practical skills rather than a mere accumulation of information and knowledge. For one thing, critical thinking is essential to scientific progress, contributing to innovation and technical advances, just as Confucius warned us, "Learning without thinking leads to confusion." For another,it is crucial to apply what you have learned to practice and that's the very reason why exceptional scientists accomplish great achievements in their fields. In a word, the Internet does provide valuable information for learners, but people should be fully aware of the essence of education and attach importance to cultivating their character and developing their ability instead of just giving priority to dependence on the Internet. Thus, only by emphasizing innovation can education be completely fulfilled in practice.

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