【题目要求】
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
【题目分析】
同意这个观点比较容易写。成年人也有娱乐的需求,从繁重的压力中解脱出来(escape),游戏对老年人更是如此。从游戏中可以学到很多东西(桥牌——团队精神;围棋、象棋——拓展智力)作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Games are always popular for not only children but also adults, and to some degree, games play an essential part in humans' life, especially refer to adults. Adult games have more complete structure and reasonable rules, so that players could benefit something from them , which they may not learn in the reality. What's most exciting and luring thing for the player in the game is a real rest among such fast-pace and competitive society, at least an escape for worry and fret from the real world. children are born to play for fun, whilst for adults, so much trouble in front of you and even more in the future, have to bear increasing overwhelming pressure and there must be some approach for them to release the disgusting stress and prepare well to survive a good life. Some small games on the computer or cell phone are exact example to illustrate the great demand for the games among adults, and luckily, games do well in relaxing people from fatigue. Another significant factor contributes to the worldwide population of games is that playing games could offer a stage for people to make friends and have common topics in the conversations, thus leading to a sort of access to socializing. It is rather effective and convenient for people to find new friends with similar hobbies and interests so as to enhance a colorful and wonderful life in the rest of the working time. Clubs, some specific groups or organizations are great and obvious demonstration for the social nets, as are formed through mature games among adults. Last but not least, games nowadays have a raising influence on the senior citizens for they are less energetic to work but have sufficient time to rest. In void of aims and decent projects, one is vulnerable to feel lonely and boring and difficult to kill the rest time of life, quite a suffering and affliction of old age. But games cater to the old, changing the condition and resulting in a healthy life in mentality. Lots of old people join in all-embracing kinds of activities to fill the blank of one's later years, for example, hiking activity, travels to interest of places and something else. When comes to games, people are more susceptible to remind of the fallout and bad effect, though they like games in the mind. However, it is not complete criticism for games for lack of actual assets. Games for adults could have more than the pure fun.
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