高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I lived in a very old town which was surrounded by many beautiful woods 10 years ago.There is a small river that cuts across the town.My house near the river.So I usually played games on the bank with my friends when I was young.You can fishing on the bank when the summer is coming.How happy I was then! But as the economic developed,the forest was cut dowm,and the river was polluted.What a bad town is now!