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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays, consumption is vital for people, especially for people in city. Everyday is a consumption day.Buy the meal,daily necessity and etc.In other words, the topic what kind of conception people hold toward consumption is more and more concerned. As for me, i advocate buy items by following your heart which means being a ease consumer.Don't care about the money instead of the likeness of you.Pursue life for yourself ,it matters most of all. There are several reasons to support my opinions. At the beginning, a smarter consumer cannot put the money in the first place rather than the joy of being a consumer. It is you who have the right to live the life you dreamed for .So when buying a product, the advantage it brings to you should kept in your mind. What needing the consideration is whether you want the item or not. Secondly, a long waiting of the discount may cause the consequence of losing the opportunity to own it.When hesitating if purchasing it,others may buy it at once . Wasting time in thinking is no better than taking action. Otherwise, the buying something expensive will be the incentive to encourage you to work hard and earn money actively. Whatever it is,such consumption positively affect the life .It really push you to lead a better life. Taking the above into consideration, i draw the following conclusion.Buying whatever you dream for deserves your efforts. Such consumption adds your life more fun in my view. Therefor i prefer this consumption.