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Well you know the China has a long history that it has a lot of interesting place to visit. Today it's my pleasure to introduce my beautiful hometown for you. China is an amazing country. Somebody may ask me why. Now I will tell you why I think China is an amazing country. First it has an amazing history which has a lot of interesting place. If you visit China , I think you will visit something interesting place. If I were you, I will visit beijing hutong.Since It has a long history. And it can stand for the archtet of China, and it can say China is a country that is long for love and peace.
