2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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mary is my good friend who come from american.today i am very happy hear that she will come to chaina .so i want to take her to visit my hometown. first i plan to take her to visit my school and to understand more chiness cuture.then we will go to the bigest garden of the city .