作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;请注意分段。
My house was in Xining city, which is located in Qinghai province, China. This home is nearly 140 square meters and there are two bedrooms and two toilets. We have balcony as well and my mother grows a lot of flowers there . Basically, it it a quiet home and I am very happy to be grown up in such home.