2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达较恰当，学术词汇表达灵活；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了。

On Excessive Packaging In recent years,with the economy growing,the phenomenon of excessive packaging is quickly increasing. Many people think that it is not a big deal,but that is not the case,because not only does excessive packaging waste resource,but also pollute the environment. In my personal view. governments need to formulate valid policies that restrict the using of package.consumers must be willing to pay for some of these solutions,while practing conservation efforts of their own.Only in this way can we protect the environment and avoid the phenomenon of waste resource. In addition to, we must start from their own to reduce the excessive packaging.