2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Communication is a necessary way in a globalized world.Since our social is more openning and infromatianal than before,the more we communnicate with others,the more opportunities we get. As we all known that without talking with child,parents can not merely understand what the situation or attitude child to the future.Then some unfortune things always happen like suicide.It is personnal result,the national ralationship without consulting were more worse than we think.It is fair to say like a edge that war indeed happenning and impair both.But the reason is absence of understand which is a result of few communication in culture and tradition. Generally speaking,communication play a critical role in success,safety and peace.