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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Communication is a necessary way globalized world.Since our society is more openning and informational than before,the more we communicate with others,the more opportunities we get. As we all know,without talking with child,parents can not merely understand what the situation or attitude child to the future.Then some unfortune things always happen like suicide.It is personal result,when it comes to the national relationship were worse than we think without consulting.It is fair to say like a two -edges weapon that war indeed happening and impair both.But the reason is absence of understanding which is a result of few communication in culture and tradition. Generally speaking,communication plays a critical role in success,safety and peace.

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