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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13031
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

可适当增加文中学术词汇的使用,注意文中个别拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Communication is a necessary way globalized world.Since our society is more openning and informational than before,the more we communicate with others,the more opportunities we get. As we all know,without talking with child,parents can not merely understand what the situation or attitude child to the future.Then some unfortune things always happen like suicide.parents always strict with children,bcause their desire chlidren will have the wider prospect and happiness life in china.However,children were tired of boring study. It is personal result,when it comes to the national relationship were worse than we think without consulting.It is fair to say like a two -edges weapon that war indeed happening and impair both.But the reason is absence of understanding which is a result of few communication in culture and tradition. Generally speaking,communication plays a critical role in success,safety and peace.

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