2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Generally speaking,communication plays a critical role in success,safety and peace. Communication is a necessary way globalized world.Since our society is more openning and informational than before,the more we communicate with others,the more opportunities we get. Parents always strict with children because their desire for children will have a wider prospect and happiness life. However children is tried of boring study.It is seeing that gap appear between them and wider when they don’t have communicated. Without talking with child,parents can not merely understand what the situation or attitude child to the future.Then some unfortune things always happen like suicide. It is personal result,when it comes to the national relationship were worse than we think without consulting.It is fair to say like a two -edges weapon that war indeed happening and impair both.But the reason is absence of understanding which is a result of few communication in culture and tradition. Generally speaking,communication plays a critical role in success,safety and peace.