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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；用词灵活多样，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
In the crowed bus, there is an old man carring his little grandchild difficultly stands and hold balance, while, indifferently, the young man disguises as the blind and sits there without any shame. The drawing is obviously exposing the feet of the clay in our modern society. The phenomenon is not rare and shocking as we have already heard a amount of accidents alike, which reveals the fact -- moral decline in social prosperity. It striks me that the typical event, melamine was added to the milk illegally, was manipulated by the household named companies , generating the publicity over moral decline. Due to Those selfish men care nothing but their profit ,moral decline could prove the devastating tragedy and made our society barely fulfill with harmony. human is so prone to be selfish and to be greedy that they reject to stand other sides to think about result by the sway of their behaviors entailing disappoint. Like the poet shelley wrote “a man ,to be great good ,must imagine intensely and comprehensively; he must put himself in to a place of anther and of many other; the pains and pleasures of his species must become his own ” only in this way can create a society fulfilled virtue
