2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

In recent years,with the economy growing,the phenomenon of excessive packaging is quickly increasing. Many people think that it is not a big deal,but that is not the case,because not only does excessive packaging waste the resource,but also pollute the environment. In my personal view,governments need to formulate valid policies that restrict using of the package.Consumers must be willing to pay for some of these solutions,while practicing conservation efforts of their own.Only in this way can we protect the environment and avoid wasting resources. In addition, we must start from their own to reduce the excessive packaging.