2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦32:关于禁止学生在校园内使用手机的规定

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　　Should students use mobile phones? 　　Recently there has been a discussion among the people on the Internet about “Should students use mobile phones?” Some people think mobile phones are necessary for students so that they can keep in touch with parents and friends easily. Besides, they can listen to music after class. 　　But other people don’t think so. They think students will concentrate more on mobile phones instead of their study. What’s more, using them may increase the parents’ economic burden. 　　In my opinion, students shouldn’t use mobile phones. Using mobile phones too long is bad for their health. Why not go out for a walk? At the same time, we need to study hard to learn more knowledge. And most schools have pay phones at the gate, students can use them if they need. So I think students needn’t own a mobile phone.