小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best firend. I have a beautiful girlfriend.She English name is linda,and she has a Chinese name is linruimei.She is from a beautiful country ,Australia,and this year she is 14 years old.It is very young.She studys in the No.2 Middle School, grade 2, class 9. And study very well.She is good at English, Chinese and computer.And she loves singing playing basketball and reading some books.She is kind and friendly.And,She is cute and very beautiful.we are always stay and eat together.She is my beast friend.