小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best firend I have a beautiful girl friend.She Chinese name is Yu Xi .She is from a beautiful country , China,and this year she is 11 years old.It is very young.She studys in the AnYuan School, grade 6, class 1. And study very well.She is good at English, Chinese and computer. She likes singing，drawing pictures and reading some books.She is kind and friendly,AndShe is cute and very beautiful.we are always stay and play together.She is my beast friend.