小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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now allow me to introduce my best friend.His nationality is australia,and he come to China as an exchange student.He is good looking,hip-hop style and fond of soul music,strange taste,isn`t it?We have found so much in common which made us the closest friends.We share our CDs,bicycles,and even wearing stuff.I love the guy not just he`s always a humor person but also an honest,open-mind genius in some fields,badminton for example,which is the exactly stuff I lack of and going after.though he is coming back home in a fews month.I don`t think distance will end up our friendship