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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36989
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文章用词灵活多样,但请注意增用学术词汇,单词拼写还要加强;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

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now allow me to introduce my best friend.His nationality is australia,and he come to China as an exchange student.He is good looking,hip-hop style and fond of soul music,strange taste,isn`t it?We have found so much in common which made us the closest friends.We share our CDs,bicycles,and even wearing stuff.I love the guy not just he`s always a humor person but also an honest,open-mind genius in some fields,badminton for example,which is the exactly stuff I lack of and going after.though he is coming back home in a fews month.I don`t think distance will end up our friendship My best firend I have a beautiful girl friend.She Chinese name is Yu Xi .She is from a beautiful country , China,and this year she is 11 years old.It is very young.She studys in the AnYuan School, grade 6, class 1. And study very well.She is good at English, Chinese and computer. She likes singing,drawing pictures and reading some books.She is kind and friendly,AndShe is cute and very beautiful.we are always stay and play together.She is my beast friend

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