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now allow me to introduce my best friend.His nationality is australia,and he come to China as an exchange student.He is good looking,hip-hop style and fond of soul music,strange taste,isn`t it?We have found so much in common which made us the closest friends.We share our CDs,bicycles,and even wearing stuff.I love the guy not just he`s always a humor person but also an honest,open-mind genius in some fields,badminton for example,which is the exactly stuff I lack of and going after.though he is coming back home in a fews month.I don`t think distance will end up our friendship My best firend I have a beautiful girl friend.She Chinese name is Yu Xi .She is from a beautiful country , China,and this year she is 11 years old.It is very young.She studys in the AnYuan School, grade 6, class 1. And study very well.She is good at English, Chinese and computer. She likes singing,drawing pictures and reading some books.She is kind and friendly,AndShe is cute and very beautiful.we are always stay and play together.She is my beast friend