拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Nothing Succeeds Without A Strong Will As is known to all that the old saying:where there is a will,there is a way.Indeed,we must constantly endeavor if we are to succeed,and we must be based on the strong willpower.Obviously,the willpower is the guarantee of success. Looking back on history ,we can easily find that someone achieved great success are those who have a firm will.For example,George Washington,the first president of the history in America, who have so firm will that he led the victory of the America war of independence.Knowing the example,we can clearly find the significance of the willpower. In common with us students,there is no way we can succeed if without studying hard.In conclusion,we must develop our willpower from now on for its counts.