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2012年1月12日雅思写作真题:设立图书馆的好处

发布时间:2013-08-06 16:49浏览次数:4583
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【题目要求

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

【题目讲解

这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要],而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多,可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。

两个问题。引言3 sentences之后,1. 讨论二者的利弊,看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法,看合段的结论3 sentences。

起段引言 Introduction

开头第一句。申论主题:使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。

开头第二句。集中焦点:冲突是两难自解。

开头第三句。一分为二:分头指引讨论二者利弊。

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文中词汇使用灵活,学术词汇使用较丰富;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Whenever I go into the newly built library in my city, the fragrant of book flows into my nose and my soul. The scene of hundreds of people concentrating on the book also makes me think of the power of knowledge and the merit this free library bring to people. However, whether building a free library is worthy of the money it cost is still a controversial topic. Many people think that Library is an important basic institute of a city no matter it is a metropolis or a small town. To begin with, government should encourage its citizens to develop the habit of reading which is an efficient way to level up people's life quality. People reading more book are more sane, gentle and creative. Consecuently, the society will be more stable, prosperous, and harmonious. Besides, reading is an effective way to promote an individual's ability in enjoying a better life. It is easier to develop the habit of reading if they are offered a library where people can relax after working under pressure or cultivate their taste by digest knowledge and ideas from other wise brains. However, other people hold the opposite opinion. They argue that there are many cheaper ways to read than building a free library. Internet, for example, working as a magnificent resource searching system, is capable to provide any book and articles. Readers can just simply type in some key words and begin to scan and to read instead of spending much time in the heavy traffic and searching for hours to find the books they are intrested in. Smart phone and ipad also help to make any book available anywhere. In my opinion, libraries built by the government is essential. It shows the attitude of government on how people should value reading. It helps a lot on encouraging citizens to develop the habit of reading. What's more, a library is a quiet and devine place where everyone forgets about the stress of job and hence slows their pace to communicate with their inherent souls. By no mean can the Internet has these advantages.

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