2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In my opinion, I want you share and introduce my hometown Tibet. First,my hometown is not like other city. There have fresh air, and you can have health life.And second, in summer there have comfortable weather.not hot like other china place. Other way,there local people very kind,and if you have any problem,they will try best to help you . and I would like take you go to the mountain top,because there have beautiful flower,and from the mountain top .you can see the other landscape.And other way,you can go to the local Buddhist Prayer Room, you can know the local traditional culture.and then you can go to taste local special food. At last, I wish you have nice travel,and have nice mood in my hometown.