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Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题：作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色。
With the development of society,many people think they should change everything brand new not still the same so that to show their formidable country.In my opinion,I prefer to combine the traditional things with the new things. There are some advantages for changing conventional things.Firstly,for our bad habits,I believe that everyone has their own bad behaviors.For example,students always feel bouncy except for when they study or do homework,once they do some unlikely thing,they will feel exhausted.Another bad habits is always sleeping at home.People spend lots of their time to sleep instead of doing something meaningful, this behavior will lead these lie-abed will accomplish nothing in the future.Secondly,for our native politics,in these past years,our country always use the old governmental system to contact with other developed countries sh that our country can not pullulate all the time.Nowadays,with the awareness of fuglemen,our government change the original system to the new capable system so that to make our country play an important part in the world. However,orthodox things also not to be neglected.On the one hand,our traditional cultures,such as Spring Festival,every people will get together to eat dumplings and watch programme,finally they will to let off fireworks in the outside to celebrate the new year.Or when the Dragon Boat Festival comes,they will make rice dumplings and play the dragon-boat racing to memorize the famous poet called QuYuan.On the other hand,for people’s exams aspect,in recent years,many kinds of tests appears to measure humans level.This method is inheriting from the past, in the old dynasty,many emperors set up the examining system to choose talents so that to strengthen their country.With the help of examination,our government will become better. To sum up,if people can use the benefits of conventional things and new things better,we can ensure that our country will become more and more powerful in the world.
