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Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题：文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
In recent years,many high school students who were graduated want to do some jobs at first,then begin their universities’s life.Personally speaking,although it will bring some benefits,their drawbacks are more than the advantages. First of all,for students’ psychokinesis aspects.Some of them can control themselves well,they concentrate on their jobs instead of playing some interesting things,such as singing karaoke or play computer games with their friends.Others are using this way to lie to their parents so that they can not study at school for a long time.If students can not tell their major problem correctly.Doing a job in the social is very unreasonably.It’s a bad behaviour of wasting time. Secondly,for teenagers’ intelligence problem aspects.Many students can not leave school to find a job,because their mental intelligence is not very powerful,if they do not study at school for a while or do not study at home determined,their original knowledge will disappear with the time goes by.When thy want to start their study in the university,they can not understand what teachers taught directly,the process of studying will become difficult.However, a few students who always studied at home when they finished their job,they can study in the university happily.Not only they gain lots of social life practice,but also they can get a perfect mark in the university. To sum up,stopping to study at school to work in the society only proper to some students’ who possessed the ability of vigoroso psychokinesis and clever mind,lots of students are not appropriate to do this kind of thing.For the most of the students,this method brings lots of weakness to them.
