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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
i would like to live a life at a slower pace.that doesn't mean that i am a lazy girl. three reasons explain why i choose this kind of living style. the first one is that one of my best friend who are so busy every day didn't got enough time to enjoy her life. the only thing she knows is to get more money and get ready to face any challenges. under this kind of pressure, the people lost themselves. they didn't have enough time to accompany their family members and their friends. sometimes they didn't notice the season changes as the color of leaves changes around them. the second reason is that i know myself clearly. if you make me do something too hurry, i will do it worse. i am easily nervous when everybody compete with each other. i think i will got heart attack if i am busy everyday. the third reason is that all my family members living in a small town. we share our weekends together and go outside to breath fresh air. we can do some interesting activities together like go skating and climbing. that not only do good to our health but also solid the relationship with each other.
