2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China Hollow,everybody,Now,lesion to me. My hometown have mountains,called DaCheng.In the spring,the mountain is discover to green,yes,just green.And in the winter, it is wirte ,just the top of mountain.In my chirdhood momerize,there have a lake,it have fish and lotus,in the summer,i like go to this lake after school and after have dinner.Windy was slowly,i felt comfortable. the pepole fiendly and hardworking.i like them. so do you like my hometown,i could tell you he name,he name ZiDan.