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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5946
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
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用户练习作文:

With the huge expansion of high technologies available to people, the connection between tow places have became more and more tightly. as a result, many citizens prefer to live in the countryside, while others do not agree with this way. in my view, I totally support the later opinion. Firstly, it is inconvenient to live in rural areas for the transportation resources are fewer than that of city. There is fewer buses, and no taxi, subway nor airplanes in the countryside. people who live there can only choose to drive private cars or walk to the destinations. if they get trouble in half way, it is impossible to call for help when there is not one person. Secondly, the healthcare system and some other basic constructions are not, residents may only go to cities to see doctor, go shopping or do some professional training if they live in some place without these facilities. what's more, it is not benefit for the development of local economy. In conclusion, living rural areas may bring much trouble for our daily life. Instead, living in urban areas can contribute to enjoy the convenient brought by advanced technology. but we do not settle down rural areas until there is a huge development.

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