适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细。
limiting the use of disposal bags the disposal bags were ever used worldwidely ,the inventation of it brings great conveniences to society .people use it to keep and carry things ,but as the time goes ,the pheomony of the overuse is more and more serious . some shopping markets give out disposal bags freely to their customers .the overuse of the disposal bags leads to the environmental pollution .because of the casual drop of the bags ,and it is made by special materials which are hard to dispart ,it was left in the solid may bring harm to the humans health . nowadays the goverment gives the limit the use of the disposal bags . this activity may reduce the use of the disposal bags ,which can stimulate the scientists invent more healthy and environmental materials .it can also make our earth more beautiful .