高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

My hometown My hometown used to be very beautiful.There were many trees surrounded which made my hometown beautiful.There were also lots of fish playing in the river.The house there was very simple and the street was narrow.People worked every day.The life was skint but people there were so satisfied. But now some things have taken place in my hometown.There are many big apartment on the street.So much cars are seen running in the street.The life of the people becomes richer and richer.But there are so many bad things in our hometown.The development of industrial polluted the environment.And the trees become less and less. So does the fish. For our hometown has been polluted.Our major work is to manage the pollution.I hope my hometown become rich and beautiful in the future.