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2012年1月12日雅思写作真题:设立图书馆的好处

发布时间:2013-08-06 16:49浏览次数:4535
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【题目要求

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

【题目讲解

这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要],而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多,可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。

两个问题。引言3 sentences之后,1. 讨论二者的利弊,看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法,看合段的结论3 sentences。

起段引言 Introduction

开头第一句。申论主题:使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。

开头第二句。集中焦点:冲突是两难自解。

开头第三句。一分为二:分头指引讨论二者利弊。

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
评语:

有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。

用户练习作文:

The public can still benefit from visiting libraries, even though these days access to the Internet can provide all kinds of information. To enhance the quality of research, it is better to make the most of both modern Web-based and traditional library resources. Establishing free libraries in each town makes sense since the use of a computer at home has its own weaknesses as well as its indisputable strengths. At this information age, the diversified advantages of using the Internet are only too obvious. Online resources can be obtained from all over the world 24 hours a day, seven days a week while a library's publications cannot provide up-to-minute information the way Web sites can. The Internet gives users opportunities for two-way communication through Facebook, Twitter, E-mail, MSN, among other electronic devices. Some sites feature rare books, documents and special collections that traditionally have been only available in libraries. Almost at no cost and merely a few clicks away, the public can read newspapers, magazines, journals and encyclopedias, no matter when or where. Furthermore, the Internet offers a complete multimedia experience--texts, video, audio, hyperlinks and graphics, etc. all at once, but such advantages often cannot be expected from town libraries. On the other hand, money spent on public libraries is certainly worth it. To start with, knowledgeable librarians can be of practical help when it comes to offering professional advice about research on particular topics. A government-financed library is supposed to use universal cataloging systems that classify and organize all resources so that it is easier for a user to locate specific information without being led to non-productive research. Whereas most Web sites provide materials characteristic of current information, only a library well-funded by public money can house printed copies that date back many decades. In addition, computers in libraries also offer free Internet connection and other electronic resources, such as reference CD-ROMs. Now that anyone can create a Web site, reliability of information on the Internet is not guaranteed, and as such there are cases in which the Internet is no substitute for the library. Money being not the issue, the government ought to have the wisdom of establishing free libraries in each community despite the fact that people can use the Internet at home or elsewhere. For quality research, libraries and the Internet are complementing each other. Were information food for the hungry mind, one might as eat out sometimes as eat at home, and at this point nobody ever ask questions whether to have "free" restaurants in town.

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