2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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It is not smart that having a conclusion what you to see and listen . First,no thinking to get a wold just is turely fool.For example,when you see a old man sleep in the accient.Now what do you to do now.A man get a hure to the old man.Realy?So,when we are seeing and listening ,we cannot to have a conclusion.