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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12943
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the society rapidly developing,computer plays a more and more significant role in our daily life.On one hand,computer makes it possible for the communication between two alienate persons.However ,on the other hand,it somewhat leads to distantly indiference,even though the two are not far from each other,hiding themselves in the Internet without a face-to-face dialogue which is acknowledged as a most convenient way. As two opposed parties are both concerned,I assert that we will never lose our previous way of communication.There’s no denying that apart from the function to convey what we want to express,the communication is sure to tighten our sentiment,making the heart and soul never feel alone,which is the aesthetic function that communication undertakes.So,however the computer advanced,we also need a face-to-face talk with others ,and this method is bound not to disappear.

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