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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。
With the society rapidly developing,computer plays a more and more significant role in our daily life.On the one hand,computer makes it possible for the communication between the two alienate persons.However,on the other hand,it somewhat leads to distantly indifference,even though the two are not far from each other,hiding themselves in the Internet without a face-to-face dialogue which is acknowledged as a most convenient way. As two opposed parties are both concerned,I assert that we will never lose our previous way of communication. There’s no denying that apart from the function to convey what we want to express,the communication is sure to show our sentiment,make the heart and soul never feel lonely,which is the humanistic value that communication undertakes.So,however the computer advanced,we also need a face-to-face talk with others,and this method is bound not to disappear.
