托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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I strongly believe that perseverance can make people stronger. And I think this idea is a real truth proved by many people. Firstly, Edison, a famous person in the history, who invented bulb we are using everyday now. He said his success is consisted of 1% spirit and 99% hard work, which means hard work and perseverance can make someone an expert in some field. Practice and practice is the only way to learn something. In addition, perseverance is not a easy thing, many of us may give up when the difficulties and failures showed. Only the people who own strong hearts can insist on. And, of course, the perseverance can practice our burden ability, which is very important in our whole life. Finally, everyone has a dream but not all of us can make it come true, most people change their mind or choose a job or career they are not in love with because of the reality they are facing. However, some of us can hold on the dreams, such as Edison, Bill Gates etc, who reached their dream eventually. In one word, I believe one can be stronger if he/she insist on the dream, and, of course, he/she should be a hard worker and never be afired of failures.