小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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my new teacher is me english teacher.she is a very lovely girl. she like to help us study english. she favorite to paly baskball ,singsong and siwmming.we is very likeher.because my teacher is a very good girl. she have long hair and big mouth .she eyes is very Charming .my very like english teacher.