小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is me english teacher.She is a very lovely girl. she is like to help us learn english. She favorite to paly basekball ,singsong and siwmming.We is very likeher.Because my teacher is a very good girl. She have long hair and big mouth .She eyes is very Charming .My very like english teacher.